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Necesito una redacción en ingles de 100 palabras sobre una noticia. Esto es lo que nos pide el profewrite a composition (100 words) about a news story  -  You can use sentences like 'Did you hear/read about...? and phrases like showing interest like 'Are they OK now?', 'really?', etc as if you were explaining the story to a friendGracias

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hi Lily!

did you heard about  the Sunny beach?
I write you to tell  you about  this story because we were planning to go there, right?

well, now I think that´s not a good idea because I read on the newspaper that the temperatures are rising and a group of sharks are changing his place to live. 

in the newspaper  there was a picture of them, are  white sharks too agressive. is dangerous swim in there 

this article frightened me . why don´t we go to the pool? I know is not the same but is safer

bye, 
Mary

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Hi Lily!

Did you hear about the man jailed for stealing Sweden's crown jewels in speedboat heist?

I write to you to tell you about this piece of news because I’m stunned. Who would think to do something so crazy?

"A 22-year-old Swedish man has been jailed for four and a half years after he was convicted of stealing Sweden's crown jewels" said on TV. The jewels are worth 6 million pound.

The police said that they had found jewels in a big dump in Estocolmo and his footprints were there.  

Bye,

Juliet

Explicación:

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